Weaving Middle School Webs

Processes

I find the hypertext composing processes that my students use very interesting. One student, for example, who did her biography web on Thomas Edison wrote the entire site out using a word processor, as if she were writing a report with small headings. She was more familiar, of course, with word processing and had experienced composing with that technology. The headings in her word processed document were the titles of each lexia she was planning to use in her site. When she finished word processing her document(s), she then printed the pages and looked for words and phrases that she could use as links. She highlighted these with a pink marker. After that she looked for lexias on her printed sheet that related to these highlighted words. If she didn't find something, she found additional information and added it to her "report." Once she was satisfied that she had all the information she needed, and that she had enough links to make her web interesting, she began copying and pasting her individual blocks of text into a web editor.

Once everything was pasted into the web editor, she added color and graphics.

I find it interesting that this student needed to see her project in a more "linear" format first. When I asked her about it, she simply replied that it was easier for her to "see" her web when it was laid out "beginning to end." But I suspect that this student, when placed in a situation that challenged her to re-think textual organization, returned to more familiar structures in order to invent. Once she was satisfied that her text said what she wanted it to say, she moved it into the less familiar space of hypertext.

Initially this student was very resistant to hypertext. She wrote in her response journal that she didn't understand why she had to "do" history in a language arts class. But in a later conversation she admitted that it wasn't so much the integration of history and language arts, but the fact that she was disoriented by the seeming lack of structure in hypertext webs. "It didn't make any sense to me," she said in a post project interview.

Such disequilibrium is common among hypertext readers, but few studies have looked at this phenomenon during hypertext composing. But that disequilibrium may explain why a number of students find it helpful to write their lexias out by hand. Some do this because they do not have a computer at home and they want to work on their webs outside of class. Others simply believe they can compose better "by hand." Teachers in the district often ask students to write several drafts of their compositions by hand before taking them to a computer lab to type their final copies. This sends a message to students that the computer can be used more as a glorified typewriter than as a tool that enables drafting processes. And this could explain why some students prefer to write their lexias out by hand first.

But many students, even after completing the poetry web and moving on to the biography web, seem to feel the need for linearity during their own composing processes. They "mix things up" later. One student reflected in his response journal: "I plan to have a linear pattern and get my pages all sorted out, and then make [them] multi-linear and break off to other things." The following week he explained that he had done this and was happy with the results. "I would do the same thing--have my biography be linear and then make it multi-linear."

Certainly we are in a period of transition between electronic text such as hypertext and book culture text. And such may be the case for a long time. The fact that students rely on their more traditional (for them) composing processes and more traditional composing technology may be a reflection of that transition. Or it may reflect a developmental process similar to that of younger children who, though they can print quite well, rely on drawings to convey meaning in their writing. Such drawings seem to reflect their uncertainty about their own writing skills (McLane, 1990). My students may be experiencing the same kinds of uncertainties in the disjointed medium of hypertext.

My hope is that they will eventually feel comfortable enough at a keyboard to write fluidly in that space, and as the year progresses I find fewer and fewer students need to compose away from the keyboard.

Whether they do their initial composing at the keyboard or not, all of my students, once they learn the technology, seem to enjoy working on their hypertext projects. I suspect some of the enjoyment has to do with the playfulness that hypertext, indeed all electronic text, enables.

 Nancy Patterson

Portland Middle School

 745 Storz Ave.

 patter@voyager.net

 April, 2000

 Portland, MI 48875