Weaving Middle School Webs

Linearity

One of the aspects of hypertext that seems to perplex my students the most is its lack of linearity. Barthes reminds uf, of course that textual linearity is an illusion, but it is one that is unwittingly and frequently thrust upon K-12 students. They are taught that all stories have a beginning, a middle, and an end. That all paragraphs have a topic sentence that usually appears at the beginning of the paragraph. They are told that ideas progress logically from a main idea to a supporting detail. They are often taught how to outline. Many teachers mistakenly lead students to believe that writing happens through a series of discrete steps rather than as a recursive process. Traditional reading tasks that require students to answer questions at the end of a selection also seem to help foster this sense of linearity--that there is one right answer to a question and that reading response is more or less a matter of guessing what the teacher knows or what the author means. Students have few opportunities, especially after they enter middle and high school, to relate text to their own personal experiences. Many teachers still directly intervene in students' attempts to interpret literature. And, it is fairly common practice to begin at the beginning of a literature anthology and progress through it it, especially in survey courses such as American and British literature. Texts that encourage browsing, such as magazines or almanacs are less priviliged in English classrooms than literature anthologies or canonical novels.

And while many of the literate activities students perform outside of school disrupt this assumed linearity, students often seem to expect that schoolish tasks should abide by more linear rules. And so authoring hypertext webs can be an unsettling experience for many of them. Students often have to be coaxed into expanding their webs. After selecting key words and phrases, they don't know what else to do. I show them, during the initial poetry web project, that they can use key terms in those lexias to expand their webs, that a lexia defining the word "plunder" can link to another one that explains how Spanish soldiers searched for gold in their New World and an explanation of how that search impacted indigenous people. This freedom to move beyond the text is often a new one for middle school students.

The poetry web project, which is the first hypertext project my students engage in, is perhaps the most difficult. Not only are they learning the software that we use, but they are wrestling with several kinds of boundaries. They wrestle with my rather open-ended expectations regarding the length of their webs. I allow them to first travel though several poetry webs completed by students the previous year. I explain that I expect them to create at least 20 lexias or nodes if they want to get an A. But I don't define what needs to go into those lexias. I allow the models to help students define the task, and I prefer to let them wrestle with the problem. I also expect to carry on hundreds of little conversations with students, both on-one-one and with the whole class, about their struggles and the meanings they are constructing during those struggles with their emerging texts. And they wrestle with their existing definition of text and how it fits with the kinds of text they are creating for their webs. While it would be luxurious to discuss the nuances of textuality with my students, I can seldom do that, mostly because middle school students are generally not ready to have those discussions. They are less concerned about the definition of text and its boundaries than they are with using a computer to create the very kind of text that does challenge its boundaries. Thirteen and fourteen year olds are not interested in Richard Lanham's predictions that hypertext will democratize education and expand the boundaries of rhetoric and poetics. They want to play.

And I let them.

In a traditional classroom, structure is used to organize student perceptions about a particular unit of study. And it is generally the teacher or a textbook that channels student attention toward that structure. But because of the disruption of structure inherent in hypertext, students are challenged to view discrete parts of a whole in a different way. Roland Barthes (S/Z, 1974), of course, believed that in the ideal text none of those discrete parts should take precidence over another. And that is one of the defining elements of hypetextuality (Landow, 1997).

Eventually, this seems to have a liberating effect on many of my students. Part of that may be because they no longer have to guess what I, as their teacher, believe to be important. They are free to follow their own interests and make their own decisions about what is important in the poem they annotate or the biography web they create. One student who annotated Mary TallMountain's "Hands of Mary Jo" made very few links from the poem itself. But because she was interested in weaving and beading, and one of her links lead to information about those arts, she expanded her web by including more information about that. She was free to explore her budding interests in those arts.

The poetry web project is a good one to start with because it allows students to progress through their chosen poem from top to bottom if they choose. The structure of the poem gives them a scaffold upon which they can build a web. Some actually research key words and phrases in their poems in this way, marching through them one after another. A student using Shirley Hill Witt's "Punto Final" may look up information on the Spanish Conquest first because "Spaniards" is in the first line of the poem. And he or she may conclude the research with a definition of "LaVieja" because that is a term used toward the end of the poem.

A few students learn very early that there is a freedom here, not only in the way they can conduct their research, but in the way that an unknown reader will browse their webs. The beauty of hypertext is that there is no set sequence for a reader or a writer (Bolter, 1991, Joyce, 1995, Landow, 1997). One student wrote in his response journal that "hypertext is sorta like how you think." And while they cannot articulate that they as authors will be sharing their agency with unknown readers, the act of creating hypertext documents helps them realize that there is an audience that they need to consider. Students know from the beginning that their work will ultimately be published on the world wide web and this knowledge places them in a more authentic author's space. Traditionally, of course, students have produced text primarily for a teacher. In more workshop oriented settings students may write for other students in the school and may be encouraged to seek out other publishing venues. But the ease of web publishing helps encourage students to play with multi-linearity. My students seem to work very hard to "get it right." They know their work will ultimately be published and they are very motivated to make their webs worthy of public viewing. I've had a number of students come up during their lunch hours to work on their webs. And students often stay after school. It seems to me that the level of concern that accompanies publishing helps emerging writers think more deliberately about their audience and play with textual structure.

But that does not mean that all students fully embrace the freedom that multi-linear text offers them.

 Nancy Patterson

Portland Middle School

 745 Storz Ave.

patter@voyager.net

 April, 2000

 Portland, MI 48875