What Internet Invention Needs
- A glossary of terms.
Perhaps because Internet Invention introduces so many terms that may or may serve as relays for people, a glossary is a good idea. Ulmer’s approach is to include a vast array of hermeneutics and let the writers pick and choose which ones will serve them as heuristics (as invention prompts). But a cross-referenced glossary might help. So, we would learn how a fiscelle resembles in form/function/feeling a punctum, and what the advantages of one term/concept over another.
- A visual schema for how the work proceeds.
I'm thinking here something like a “time line” cartoon type rendering of stages and steps, perhaps? And to avoid a lock-step/instruction manual feeling, it could be done like a cross word puzzle, with two axes (para and syn).
- More explicit and better organized assignments.
I like the subsections Ulmer uses. The book is divided into sections that remediate actual F-2-F encounters between people seeking wisdom: “studio” recapitulates a textbook’s pedagogy of assignments and supporting readings and exempla; “remakes” are like art installations/exhibits that dramatize how electracy reconfigures techniques and themes already in use in “classics of arts and entertainment”; “lectures” explain after the fashion of the sage the pedagogy of the widesite (the discovery of a nexus linking one’s involvement across several discourses/domains of knowledge/interpellation); “Ulmer File” revives that classic school genre, the show n’ tell, Ulmer’s own widesite; “Office” is a simulation of office hours, a mentoring environment where the prof anticipates difficulties/questions and puts it in simpler terms and in a context that will help students get the job done. But it is difficult always to know where to find assignments. Some appear in Studio and others in Office. Perhaps I'm just used to the "Exercises" coming at the end of the chapter in traditional textbooks?
- More suggestions for grading criteria and time schedule.
I love this book but it would take a semester to figure out how to grade students on their projects. Perhaps I would have to use this as a supplementary text and mostly grade their journal reflections on their process?
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This book needs usability testing. It needs to be used by a variety of teachers in a variety of contexts.