However,
Hemingway achieves a greater sense of irony by keeping his protagonist ignorant to the fate of
his fish. In retrospect, I could have argued that this use
of irony further subverts
Santiago’s patriarchal sense of ownership.
Overall,
I was very pleased with the paper.
Aside from my failure to
recognize the full potential of my argument, I have a strong grasp on the theme. This strength derived from the culmination of prior knowledge, research time,
and thorough planning. The end result is one of my best all around
papers.