For this paper, I constructed a rough outline, dividing the writers by their opposing ideologies toward the Victorian idea of progress.  Although I do a better job constructing my analysis from the texts, there are still lapses. I fail to adequately support my analysis of Mill’s ideology by using insufficient support:  I use only one text in my analysis on Mill; whereas, I use at least two for each Browning and Arnold.  Also, the paragraph structures are not parallel:  I devote nearly three times as much analysis to Browning as I do Mill.  I believe this illustrates a problem with maintaining an objective analysis.  During my analysis of Arnold, I use an allusion to his poem “The Scholar Gypsy” to explicate Arnold’s position, yet I fail to make the purpose of the reference explicit.  Like the previous paper, my conclusion does not efficiently summarize the paper.  I cram too many ideas in sentences. There are a few mistakes with MLA:  I fail to make a few necessary citations.