What Writing Students Get From the Net: Using Synchronous Communication
to Develop Writerly Skills
Lara Whelan's E110 -- University of Delaware, Spring 1999
Audience: An E-110 class which has NOT done any work on gender and
language
Length: 3-5 pages
Argue why it either IS or IS NOT important to understand
and/or acknowledge gender differences in language.Include in your discussion
an explanation of what these differences might be or how they might be
defined, but do not simply write a paper detailing these differences. Make
an argument about why we should/should not care about them.
In constructing this paper, be aware of the following:
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Thesis: You must have a thesis for this paper, and it must be clear.
It must take a stand, even if the paper discusses the pros and cons of
the issue. In other words, your paper must have a point to make, something
to argue for. Don't be wishy-washy and don't preface your thesis with "I
believe" or any similar phrase. Make a statement.
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Main points: As always, you should have at least three, and they
all must be directly relevant to your thesis. Further, your writing should
make it absolutely clear for your audience how, exactly, each main point
supports your thesis.
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Development of main points: For evidence, you should use a combination
of personal experience, good reasons, and expert opinion as represented
in the articles we have read for this class. This means you must be responsible
about how you use the ideas of others: put direct quotations in quotes;
identify paraphrases or summaries with phrases like "According to Tannen...".
However, don't depend entirely on quotations from other sources. No one
wants to read a paper made entirely of quotes (*yawn*).
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Detail: Make sure that each point is illustrated (think specific
mental picture for the reader) with a variety of concrete detail. Avoid
generalities, especially given that your audience does not share your experiences
or knowledge of the subject.
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Audience: Think hard about how you will convince your audience that
you are right. Impersonal lectures probably aren't going to work. Specific,
age-related, experience-related examples probably have a better shot. Speaking
directly to your audience is always effective, as long as you really are
speaking to them, and not at them. Think about what kinds of arguments
convince YOU.
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Concessions: You must make concessions. You must think about and
acknowledge areas where your argument is open to attack, and you must answer
your opposition by explaining why those objections are null and void. Even
if your audience is friendly to what you are saying, you still must have
concessions.