Part B engages students in synthesizing and analyzing their observations and work samples as they relate to Part A; students interpret the data from their observations and work samples in relation to their development as readers, writers, thinkers, and learners and as they relate to the five dimensions of learning; they must relate these dimensions to their overall learning, while practicing concise interpretation and summation. In addition, students must select appropriate evidence that demonstrates their processes and development; by doing so, students participate in the rhetorical processes of arguing, interpreting, and reasoning.
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This student takes a very formal approach in analyzing her learning; in each paragraph, she sums up the activities and course objectives then provides specific examples of her learning and growth. For example, she discusses how the argumentative paper exemplifies rhetorical skills, how the two group projects "boosted [her] confidence," and how the group projects also "transformed [her] into a leader." This section of the LRO is quite different from other portfolios; instead of providing a rationale for the inclusion of individual assignments, or an explanation of knowledge gained from individual assignments, or a paragraph or two about the general changes in the student's work, the LRO requires that students look at the overall process of their learning and specifically relate this learning to their course objectives and observations. The philosophy of this section is very different for it asks students to be philosophical about themselves and their learning (as exemplified by the focus on emerging and prior knowledge, see the first paragraph Part B1) and not just about their papers and individual skills, as many portfolio models encourage (see the Analysis of Skills and Processes section from the "Issues" section of this project).
B1 Date When I review my previous work I noticed that I skirted around issues because I was afraid to offend. I was also afraid that my opinions were inconclusive and therefore it could not support my views. My later works show direct, to the point opinions proving my confidence in my writing. Not only was I just reading essays, but I was also gaining knowledge from the authors. As I learned to dissect other writers' works it helped me to develop an understanding of what makes a better writer. Reading argumentative essays will later help in the development of my research. I look at the writing and I can see what makes for a persuasive essay and I can use this knowledge to persuade my readers. I am ashamed to admit that as I become a stronger writer I look at my old techniques and wonder how my writing could be so bad? It is only until now that I understand the foundation of my writing is not as concrete as I would like it. Taking the grammar quizzes and finding out I am horrible at it is a hard thing for me to comprehend. In the past I always wrote what sounded right instead of what is correct. In the future I am hoping to build up my understanding of grammar so that what I have to say has credit. As I look at my observations I also notice that I started out as an unsure student with a lot of questions about what the class wanted. Now my observations show what I am gaining in the classroom. Hopefully as time passes I will have a more in-depth look at what rhetoric really means. B2 Date |
Although this student does not directly focus on individual assignments, she does focus on the before-and-after aspects of her learning. This student's work really exemplifies the recognition of the complex dimensions of learning that the LRO fosters by requiring students to look at their observations and individual perceptions and growth (concerning individual assignments/activities/skills).
This student recognizes that although she has learned and improved much, that she still has much to work on. In fact, in B2, she recognizes that when collaborating, and thus dealing with conflicting positions and ideas, she must trust herself and exert her independence, but at the same time recognize and (at times) validate others' positions. She recognizes that in situations like this, and in general, learning and writing operate amongst multiple spheres.
This student's work also exemplifies the personal growth and understanding that the philosophy and methodology of the LRO promote; this student is now aware of what "makes [her] a better writer" and how she has "become a stronger writer." Although her work (here) does seem to be simplistic and similar to work from other portfolio models (since she focuses on the before and after), she is able to recognize the complexities of learning and writing by looking at a variety of sources/evidence — observations, summary, interpretation.
Like Part A and the observations, Part B requires students to reflect and connect their changes and development, once again stressing the multi-dimensional and process-driven nature of learning and writing.